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Lesson: Sentence Correction Challenging - 24t09

Practice With Style

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Evaluate each of the following answer choices in terms of its style and decide whether it is flawed. If it's flawed, identify the style error (redundancy, wordiness, word order). When you're ready, click Continue.
1. she often warned him that the ski slope was dangerous more than once
  flawed not flawed    
2. she often warned him of the danger of the slope for skiing
  flawed not flawed    
3. she often warned him that the ski slope was dangerous
  flawed not flawed    
4. he was often warned by her of the danger of the ski slope
  flawed not flawed    
5. she, having often warned him that the ski slope was dangerous
  flawed not flawed    

This choice is not flawed and would be an acceptable choice. Whether the third sentence would be better would depend on the exact context of the stem sentence.

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