Body - Third paragraph
The third paragraph of the body should include the weakest argument, weakest
example, weakest illustration, or an obvious follow up to the second paragraph
in the body. The first sentence of this paragraph should contain the reverse
hook, which ties in with the transitional hook at the end of the second
paragraph. The topic for this paragraph should be in the first or second
sentence. This topic should relate to the thesis statement in the introductory
paragraph. The last sentence in this paragraph should include a transitional
concluding hook that signals the reader that this is the final major point being
made in this essay. This hook also leads into the concluding paragraph.
Concluding paragraph
The fifth paragraph is the summary paragraph. It is important to restate the
thesis and three supporting ideas in an original and powerful way as this is the
last chance the writer has to convince the reader of the validity of the
information presented.
This paragraph should include the following:
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an allusion to the pattern used in the introductory paragraph,
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a restatement of the thesis statement, using some of the original language or
language that "echoes" the original language. (The restatement, however, must
not be a duplicate thesis statement.)
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a summary of the three main points from the body of the essay.
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a final statement that gives the reader signals that the discussion has come to
an end. (This final statement may be a "call to action" in a persuasive essay.)
Example
1Stephen King, creator of such stories as Carrie and Pet Sematary, stated
that the Edgar Allan Poe stories he read as a child gave him the inspiration and
instruction he needed to become the writer that he is. 2Poe,
as does Stephen King, fills the reader's imagination with the images that he
wishes the reader to see, hear, and feel. 3His
use of vivid, concrete visual imagery to present both static and dynamic
settings and to describe people is part of his technique. 4Poe's
short story "The Tell-Tale Heart" is a story about a young man who kills an old
man who cares for him, dismembers the corpse, then goes mad when he thinks he
hears the old man's heart beating beneath the floor boards under his feet as he
sits and discusses the old man's absence with the police. 5In
"The Tell-Tale Heart," a careful reader can observe Poe's skillful manipulation
of the senses.
The introductory
paragraph includes a
paraphrase of something said by a famous person in order to get the reader's
attention. The second sentence leads up to the thesis statement which is the
third sentence. The thesis statement (sentence 3) presents topic of the paper to
the reader and provides a mini- outline. The topic is Poe's use of visual
imagery. The mini- outline tells the reader that this paper will present Poe's
use of imagery in three places in his writing: (1) description of static
setting; (2) description of dynamic setting; and (3) description of a person.
The last sentence of the paragraph uses the words "manipulation" and "senses" as
transitional hooks.
1The sense of sight, the primary sense, is particularly susceptible to
manipulation. 2In
"The Tell-Tale Heart," Poe uses the following image to describe a static scene:
"His room was as black as pitch with the thick darkness . . ." Poe used the
words "black," "pitch," and "thick darkness" not only to show the reader the
condition of the old man's room, but also to make the reader feel the darkness." 3"Thick"
is a word that is not usually associated with color (darkness), yet in using it,
Poe stimulates the reader's sense of feeling as well as his sense of sight.
In the first sentence of the second paragraph (first
paragraph of the body) the words "sense" and "manipulation" are used to
hook into the end of the introductory paragraph. The first part of the second
sentence provides the topic for this paragraph--imagery in a static scene. Then
a quotation from "The Tell-Tale Heart" is presented and briefly discussed. The
last sentence of this paragraph uses the expressions "sense of feeling" and
"sense of sight" as hooks for leading into the third paragraph
1Further on in the story, Poe uses a couple of words that cross not only
the sense of sight but also the sense of feeling to describe a dynamic scene. 2The
youth in the story has been standing in the open doorway of the old man's room
for a long time, waiting for just the right moment to reveal himself to the old
man in order to frighten him. 3Poe
writes: "So I opened it [the lantern opening]--you cannot imagine how
stealthily, stealthily--until, at length, a single dim ray, like the thread of
the spider, shot from out the crevice and fell full upon the vulture eye." 4By
using the metaphor of the thread of the spider (which we all know is a creepy
creature) and the word "shot," Poe almost makes the reader gasp, as surely did
the old man whose one blind eye the young man describes as "the vulture eye."
The first sentence of the third paragraph (second
paragraph of the body) uses the words "sense of sight" and "sense of
feeling" to hook back into the previous paragraph. Note that in the second
paragraph "feeling" came first, and in this paragraph "sight" comes first. The
first sentence also includes the topic for this paragraph--imagery in a dynamic
scene. Again, a quotation is taken from the story, and it is briefly discussed.
The last sentence uses the words "one blind eye" which was in the quotation.
This expression provides the transitional hook for the last paragraph in the
body of the paper.
1The reader does not know much about what the old man in this story looks
like except that he has one blind eye. 2In
the second paragraph of "The Tell-Tale Heart," Poe establishes the young man's
obsession with that blind eye when he writes: "He had the eye of the vulture--a
pale blue eye, with a film over it." 3This
"vulture eye" is evoked over and over again in the story until the reader
becomes as obsessed with it as does the young man.4His
use of the vivid, concrete word "vulture" establishes a specific image in the
mind of the reader that is inescapable.
In the first sentence of the fourth paragraph (third
paragraph in the body), "one blind eye" is used that hooks into the
previous paragraph. This first sentence also lets the reader know that this
paragraph will deal with descriptions of people: ". . . what the old man looks
like . . .." Once again Poe is quoted and discussed. The last sentence uses the
word "image" which hooks into the last paragraph. (It is less important that
this paragraph has a hook since the last paragraph is going to include a summary
of the body of the paper.)
1"Thick darkness," "thread of the spider," and "vulture eye" are three
images that Poe used in "The Tell-Tale Heart" to stimulate a reader's senses. 2Poe
wanted the reader to see and feel real life. 3He
used concrete imagery rather than vague abstract words to describe settings and
people. If Edgar Allan Poe was one of Stephen King's teachers, then readers of
King owe a debt of gratitude to that nineteenth-century creator of horror
stories.
The first sentence of the concluding
paragraph uses the principal
words from the quotations from each paragraph of the body of the paper. This
summarizes those three paragraphs. The second and third sentences provide
observations which can also be considered a summary, not only of the content of
the paper, but also offers personal opinion which was logically drawn as the
result of this study. The last sentence returns to the Edgar Allan Poe-Stephen
King relationship that began this paper. This sentence also provides a "wrap-up"
and gives the paper a sense of finality.
5 paragraph essay topics are not limited to anything, as anything can be
discussed in this type of essay. You can choose the essay topic that you know
the most about, for example:
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Economic Power of the US
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The Best City in The World
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My Grandfather
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My First Teacher
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What is the Green House Effect
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Teaching Techniques