Sample Command of Evidence Questions
To give you a better understanding of what to expect from Command of Evidence questions on the SAT Writing and Language Test, let's take a look at a sample passage and a couple of sample Command of Evidence questions.
Passage
Most people are surprised to find that their diets are full of hidden sugar. There are added sugars hiding in yogurt, cereal, tomato sauce, salad dressing, and even bread. Parents are often shocked to find that the so-called healthy, whole-grain cereal and low-fat milk they serve their children in the morning can contain a whopping 30 grams of sugar. This is more sugar than the American Heart Association recommends an adult consume in an entire day. Parents are sending their children out the door on a sugar high, and when the children get to school, they are likely to crash.
While some sugar is naturally occurring, such as the sugar found in fruit, the added sugars are the real problem, and likely the culprit of the obesity epidemic in America today. Studies have suggested that higher intake of added sugar is associated with cardiovascular disease risk factors. A Harvard Study found that drinks with added sugar increase the risk of obesity and diabetes, and both portion size and consumption has risen dramatically in the last 40 years. Sugar intake must be reduced in order to lower obesity rates.
Passage Questions
Now that you've read the passage, try answering these questions.
1. The author is considering deleting the first underlined sentence. Should the sentence be kept or deleted?
- Kept because it gives an example of hidden sugars in the diet.
- Kept because it provides evidence about what happens when kids eat too much sugar
- Deleted because it doesn't provide an example of what happens when kids eat too much sugar
- Deleted because it blurs the passage's focus on hidden sugars in the diet
The correct answer is D. The focus of the passage is hidden sugars in the diet. While the previous sentences provide an example of how parents may be serving their children hidden sugars in breakfast cereals, this sentence focuses more on the effects of sugar on children. This is not the focus of the paragraph, so this sentence should be deleted.
2. The author wants to add more details to the final underlined sentence to strengthen the argument. Which choice best strengthens the argument?
- No change
- And reduce the risk of heart disease and diabetes
- For children and adults
- From sugary drinks
The best answer choice is B. This best adds detail to the sentence and reinforces the argument that added sugars are contributing to serious health problems faced by many Americans.
Graphical Interpretation
Some Command of Evidence questions involve interpreting a graphic as part of a passage. In these questions, you are asked to read the passage and review the accompanying graphic. You will need to choose the response that accurately represents the graphical data and adjust the text of the passage to make sure the writer's claim about the data is correct.