Common Verb Tense Errors
So, now that we've reviewed the six verb tenses, what do we need to know about verb tense errors and how to spot and avoid them? The most important thing to remember is to keep your verb tenses consistent. If you are telling a story that happened in the past and you're using the past tense, it's important not to slip into the present tense - or any other tense - here and there, even if you want to give the sense of immediacy to what you're telling.
A common assignment that many high school and college students encounter is a narrative essay, in which the writer will be asked to relate a personal story. Some writers choose to use the present tense to convey a sense of immediacy or excitement.
That can be tricky, however, because a very, very common mistake student writers make is lapsing back into the past tense occasionally throughout the narrative. While it's technically okay to write a story using the present tense, the key rule will still apply: keep your verb tense consistent. Don't ever switch back and forth between the past and present tense.
Sometimes, consistency problems with verb tense arise within a single sentence. Perhaps you want to explain a common, everyday practice by using the present tense. For example, you might say, 'In the main office, the receptionist takes your name.' Trouble might arise, however, when you add an additional action to the mix: 'In the main office, the receptionist takes your name and will ask you to take a seat.' This sentence may sound okay at first, but take a look at the verb tenses used. Our first verb, 'takes,' is in the present tense, but the second verb, 'will ask,' is in the future tense.
We could solve it by putting both verbs in the present tense or both of them in the future tense. For example, you could use the present tense to say, 'In the main office, the receptionist takes your name and asks you to take a seat.' Or, you could use the future tense to say, 'In the main office, the receptionist will take your name and will ask you to take a seat.' Just be sure that you've been consistent with your verb tense when you are relating actions or occurrences within the same time frame.
How to Edit for Verb Tense Errors
At the beginning of this lesson, I mentioned that some writing errors occur when writers get a bit sloppy. Verb tense errors usually occur when writers simply aren't paying quite as much attention as they should be to the details in their sentences. The good news is that these sloppy errors are among the easiest types to fix. Careful proofreading of your papers can eliminate this problem for good.
As you proofread an essay, you should read through it a few times. You should read through at least once to check for errors in general, and read through a few more times, each time looking specifically for one different type of error that you know you're prone to making. Particularly if you've written a narrative essay or an essay about historical events, take a look to see if you've stuck to the same tense throughout your essay. Be sure that your verb tense is consistent!
It's important to note that there are times when it's okay to mix verb tenses. For example, if you need to juxtapose two time frames in a single sentence, then you'd need to use two different tenses. You might say, 'I like thinking about the day that I got married.' Here, you would use the present tense verb, 'like,' to let your reader know that this is something that you currently do and that you continue to do. The past tense verb, 'got,' lets your reader know that you're thinking about a past event.
Similarly, you might say, 'I remember the time that I broke my arm.' The present tense verb, 'remember,' alerts your reader to the fact that this is a current action relating to a past event, which is signified by the past tense verb, 'broke.'
The type of error that you do want to avoid is one like this, which is the type that might occur in a narrative essay: 'My second grade teacher was the best teacher I ever had, and she had inspired me. She keeps encouraging me to work harder. She helped me become a better student.' The writer is telling a story set in the past, but tosses a past perfect tense verb into the first sentence and a present tense verb into the mix in the second sentence.
In this example, there's no actual reason to shift tenses. Here, it's an error that resulted from the writer trying to bring a sense of immediacy to a personal narrative and failing to check for consistency. It would make the most sense to change all of the verb tenses in these sentences to the past tense. To avoid that mistake in your essays, just remember to proofread carefully.